Sunday, September 8, 2013
Blog Response #1
Thesis subject:
Modd -
An expression of excitement; The epidimy of striving for succession.?
Synonyms:
Zoned
Blacked out
Went blood
Off the grid
Clssification:
There are two types of environments that strongly apply the phrase Modd.
First is the Caribbean, where the term originated and is used as more of an expression.
The second is in East Brooklyn, New York where it is used as more of an indication.
Negation:
It isn't taken lightly.?
Illustration:
One day I was in a battle where I jumped over some chairs and hurt myself, and although I got back up and continued dancing I couldn't remember the rest of my routine so I stopped, but everyone including my opponent said I still went Modd. I felt better even though I lost.
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Epitome is the correct spelling of epidimy :).
ReplyDeleteFor synonyms, you have other slang phrases, which is fine. However, use commas between each phrase!
Your negation example is too vague. What is "it"? Give a few more examples. From what we talked about: modd isn't routine; modd isn't normal movement; modd isn't expectant. Stretch out the ways you try to define. As you continue to revise past the second draft, try to come up with modd definitions!
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